Developing idea from feedback

 

Our production group pitched our idea to our head of production and teacher - we realised that our backup idea would be more fun and interesting to film, so we focused more closely on this idea. We developed our idea by;

               - adding more symbolism with the dead 'body' with using some sort of substance so it looks more like a 'massacre' instead of a killing and we don't have to use a body.

               - we developed another concept where the innocent bystander of a man also becomes in danger towards the end and starts running away.

               - costume - we decided to focus on the costume of the dead girl and juxtapose the costume with her state, the costume would look innocent and young while her body is completely mutilated. we will make this look realistic with effects and fake blood over the 'body'

               - we thought a dog would be effective to bring focus to the dead girl where the dog sniffs the body and makes that the main focus 

               - film from creature pov to fit into horror convention